I’m a Half-pire, my dad is a vampire( I think it’s my dad) and my mom is human( i think)
I haven’t read that book(yet) i have it reserved and i am 3rd in line.waiting. I cut myself and i am very random. I am male and can do the splits. I’m a weirdo.Okay a little too much info about myself.Now people will complain that i should get pro help for cutting myself. Just wait and see.
I haven’t read that book(yet) i have it reserved and i am 3rd in line.waiting. I cut myself and i am very random. I am male and can do the splits. I’m a weird little person.Okay a little too much info about myself.Now people will complain that i should get pro help for cutting myself. Just wait and see.
Okay I’m not in 3rd grade.I’m in 8th. Okay you got me, im NOT joking
the tillybait helped the most
okay there are 2 types of blood, sweet(my favorite) or salty.I haven’t had sweet in a while. Just salty.I like both though, so it’s not really judging I have to have it, it’s that it’s good, and I love it’s taste.

Ok so ive got a problem

My style *sigh again*

Its my huge debate
and maby you guys can help me

I LOVE scene/emo
I love the boys
I love the bold style
I love the hair! omg yes
I just love it

my heart lol I guess sorta Burns for it (sounds dramatic) XD
Its a yearning to be as amazing as all those scene queens

the hair, the clothes
Are a little over the top as you might say
And so am I lol

But I feel as if, when I wear skinny jeans fluffed up scene hair ,thick eye liner
People treat me differently
like Im a freak or a bad person
And I probably look like one but…It just feels so right!

Honestly the fact I go to a All Cristian/conservative school doesn’t help at all
The people there are well…o,o ANAL
they don’t cuss,date
Or have any other fashion group other than conservative
Its a private school

And there School dress codes are WAY over the top
it says in print (NO GOTHIC CLOTHING,NO BLACK NAIL POLISH,NO EXTREAME HAIR STYLES)

I mean wtf communists much

And the way they dress there
if you dress like a emo/scene kid
Your automatically labeled EVIL O>O satanic demonic EVIL!!!!OUTCAST "shes a tad odd"
"my mommy says i shouldn’t hang out with her"

Ugh its just a struggle
The only other person that I can relate to in "Love of emo/scene culture" at my school, is my best friend Courtney
who is vary daring in the fashion department and I admire her for it

Maby The reason people treat me like im a weirdo when I dress scene/emo is that I just dont pull it off like all the other scene beauty’s out there
I am *ahem* just a bit more buxom than the other skinny model-esk girls out there

so what do you think I shoud do?

it’s not like i’m desperate or anything.
i mean, about 2 of the most popular guys have liked me (shocking really considering how shy i am in front of new people)
but they liked me when i COULDN’T date yet.
and a lot of the other guys that liked me were my bestfriends

i’m so tired of having the gamers and nerds liking me (but i love them so much. they call me the 5 year old and the weirdo so we’re even)
i just want to see what a jock or the "gangsta" guys are like… when not being a complete jerk

(remember i’m not stereotyping here. it’s just easier to put them in catagories that fit their personalities. i was thought to be a conceited loud girl and a gothic/emo. it’s all good in the hood)

i have the potential, i’m bubbly, outgoing, smart (not in math), and …i guess beautiful (a lot of people say it… like u can actually believe your friends and family)

the only thing is i’m shy in front of new people.
how do i snag a hottie?

Not everyone. Just most people I meet. I don’t even have to talk to them and they think of me officially as a freak. BUT, most of them are teenagers so I’m just wondering, is it just immaturity and nothing more?

Okay this is why they think of me that way. In school (most people think I’m a freak or weirdo there. They might even think I’m crazy) I’m a very quiet person. Honestly, throughout the whole school year, I’d have only talked to about 10 students in total, not even everyday. That’s one reason why everyone thinks I’m a weirdo.

I don’t exactly look normal. Yeah, I’m fit, I do play sports and workout, but that can’t keep people from staring at my 12 inch long head. I also look like a fucking zombie or a vampire. I have 12 freaking fangs, black circles around my eyes, and I’m pale. Not anymore but that’s because I have a tan now.

Lastly, I’m shy. I tend to act weird and stiff around people I don’t know, because I’m shy.

What makes them want to think of me this way when they now it’s not the end of the world if someone is shy and quiet? I’m not gonna include the part about my head…because yeah I know that would matter if you meet someone new. Especially if it’s the opposite sex, male AND female.

AND IM NOT A TWILIGHT FAN! So it makes me mad that people keep calling me a twilight freak when i’ve liked vampires since forever..My sister who is 14 years older than me loved vampires (and I’m 21 now)and I’ve been into them since I can remember! So don’t call me a twilight fan. But I want to know why this is happening all of the sudden? I know vampires dont exist but I find myself wanting them too very badly since these dreams! I dont want to be a weirdo. What do you think?

Right im so confused, Since i was around seven (Im 13 now) I had these nightmares where i was either A. Chased by a dinosaur or B. In one of those horrible video games being chased by a vampire.
i could always see ahead of me in the dream and i could control what way i ran… then when i realised i was in a dream i would wake myself up by thinking of lobsters (Dont ask.)
so yeah and then when i got to about 11 my friends kept telling me about there nightmares and i would say ‘Just think about lobsters’ and they would laugh and say you couldnt control your dreams. So i got really confused and started to panic thinking i was a weirdo :’]
but then yesterday it happened again but i was looking down on myself and i could move my hands when i wanted too and this happened for ages and ages, in the end i managed to make myself sit up but then i woke up for school. I was so tired today and i have just looked on Google etc…
But is all of that lucid dreaming or am i just mad ? =’] thanks
Maybe im tired because im Anemic? Meh i dont know Thanks tho :’]
But also yeah i dont mean to be akward big headed or whatever you call it but i dont find it that big of a deal :/ Why is it to you so good?

I’m kind of a jerk-ish guy, and I like a certain type of chick, hawt and all that.

But somehow I fell hard for this girl, and shes a weirdo, like her myspace is all gothic and dark and stuff, and she likes these crazy bands and stuff.

I’m like a talker in class and all that so she didn’t really like me at first, but I went out of my way to get to know her cos she seemed so cool and she says that now! She feels the same way, isn’t that great?

I don’t know if I should ask her out, cos she has these guys that are more her speed you know? Other dudes in black clothing with funky hair who like her kind of music, while I’m more sporty and I just listen to whatever, it doesn’t seem like we’d get along cos we don’t really like the same things, but shes attracted to me and I think shes beautiful and interesting

But she doesn’t trust me cos I suppose, I must’ve been mean to one of her friends or someone or something happened, I don’t doubt it, I used to pick on people when I was a freshman but I’m done with that now and I really want her to not see me as the dumb jerk

How can I do that?

Hi please tell me if you think this would be a good thing to continue and if you would read it. Please just like a critique of it.

Illusion

25th March 2009

That was the day I met Alexis Duchel. She just waltzed gracefully into the classroom and sat down in a desk at the side of the room. As soon as she sat down her head whizzed around to stare at me, she knew I was a vampire, she could smell my scent.

She was mysterious, I knew she must be a vampire; she had all the physical features. Dark eyes, pale as chalk, brunette hair drifting down her back and perfectly white teeth. I had always been lonely in school, no one wanted to be near the gothic boy, the weirdo. It was just because I was different, I dressed differently, and I couldn’t go out in the sun because I shrivelled up like a girl in a sun bed. But I haven’t properly introduced myself, my name is Gabriel and I am a vampire.

All through first period she kept on staring at me, continuously it was starting to get quite spooky, although if she tried to attack or hurt me I knew I could fight her off no problem. When the bell rang, she stalked over to me and whispered in my ear in a low tone so as no one else could hear, “meet me on the right top corner of the field at break, you got it?” I meekly nodded to indicate I “got it” then I quickly jogged off to my next class.

All through biology I couldn’t concentrate, I just kept wondering what she was going to say, no one ever went to the far end of the field, it was rumoured that someone got killed there.
She was there waiting for me, as soon as the bell went I shot outside at my fastest speed of 100mph, the fastest in our league of vampires so I could be there first, but she was already there. I was half scared of her, half wanting her to just get closer and tell me all about her. My heart was pounding ferociously and I approached… What was she going to do?… What was she going to say?…

“ Hey, you’re late.” She shouted at me from across the field, “I said the start of break not halfway through.” I ran across the field, I didn’t particularly want to make this new girl angry. She looked me up and down surveying me, almost seeing if I was good enough for her, seemed like I was because she started talking again. “ Hi, I’m Alexis Duchel, and you are Gabriel Lison.” She bared her perfect pearl fangs at me in an extremely ferocious manner, but I wasn’t scared of her, well maybe a tiny part of me was but not much.

“Listen, I know you do not have any friends here mainly because you are the
because you are the only vampire family in the neighbourhood, but now im here you are going to be friends with me. OK ?” She now had her smooth as silk hand in a tight grip around my throat. “ You sit with me in class, you eat lunch with me, well sit with me anyway, but you share feed and blood with me.” Okay I was a tiny bit scared of her now

Please answer in full

1. Would you read this book ?

2. What did you like about it ?

3. What did you not like about it ?

4. What can I improve ?

5 What advice would you give me.

Illusion

25th March 2009

That was the day I met Alexis Duchel. That was the day my life changed for ever. This is the day it ALL happened… She just waltzed gracefully into the classroom and sat down in a desk at the side of the room. As soon as she sat down her head whizzed around to stare at me, her cold blue eyes digging into me, she knew I was a vampire, she could smell my scent.

She was mysterious, I knew she must be a vampire; she had all the physical features. Dark eyes, pale as chalk, brunette hair drifting down her back and perfectly white teeth. I had always been lonely in school, no one wanted to be near the gothic boy, the weirdo. It was just because I was different, I dressed differently, and I couldn’t go out in the sun because I shrivelled up like a girl in a sun bed. But I haven’t properly introduced myself, my name is Gabriel and I am a vampire.

All through first period she kept on staring at me, continuously it was starting to get quite spooky, although if she tried to attack or hurt me I knew I could fight her off no problem. When the bell rang, she stalked over to me and whispered in my ear in a low tone so as no one else could hear, “meet me on the right top corner of the field at break, in the shade, you got it?” I meekly nodded to indicate I “got it” then I quickly jogged off to my next class.

All through biology I couldn’t concentrate, I just kept wondering what she was going to say… no one ever, EVER went to the far end of the field, it was rumoured that years back someone got killed there…

* * * * *

She was there waiting for me, as soon as the bell went I shot outside at my fastest speed of 100mph, the fastest in our league of vampires so I could be there first, but she was already there. I was half scared of her, half wanting her to just get closer and tell me all about her. My heart was pounding ferociously and I approached… What was she going to do?… What was she going to say?…

“ Hey, you’re late.” She shouted at me from across the field, “I said the start of break not halfway through.” I ran across the field, I didn’t particularly want to make this new girl angry. She looked me up and down surveying me, almost seeing if I was good enough for her, seemed like I was because she started talking again. “ Hi, I’m Alexis Duchel, and you are Gabriel Lison.” She bared her perfect pearl fangs at me in an extremely ferocious manner, but I wasn’t scared of her, well maybe a tiny part of me was but not much.

“Listen, I know you do not have any friends here mainly because you are the only vampire family in the neighbourhood, but now I’m here you are going to be friends with me. OK ?” She now had her smooth as silk hand in a tight grip around my throat. “ You sit with me in class, you eat lunch with me, well sit with me anyway, but you share food and blood with me.” Okay I was a tiny bit scared of her now, but she was kind of attractive when she was angry.

The bell rang, piercing the conversation and ending it there. She pulled her hand away from my neck, tossed her hair and walked off keeping in the shade. My head was spinning, and I was so confused, should I like this girl or should I stay away from her.

Thanks.
6. Do you think I should continue it.