Something for lovechild. she asked for this a while back. Comments and critiques.?
black
Too late to turn back the hands of time,
Content with the silence, I don’t know why.
Pain and agony and torture endured,
The guilt of her death cannot be cured.
Her silence ignored, no one cared why,
You’re in denial, the truth still remains.
Between the past and your soul, tattered regret,
What was left of her life, she could take it no more.
It seems I was born an eternity ago,
A freak of nature, a carnival show.
Everyone I love, have long since died,
I live life again, like perpetual original sin.
My life is nonfatal, I live to not die,
Unharmed I walk, alive for all time.
I’d kill myself, but still I’d survive,
I’m fighting the curse, the end I can’t find.
I cannot breathe, I can’t feel a thing,
Just suicidal dreams, I want to scream.
Inside myself, I see nothing but black,
What’s happening to me…Why can’t I die?
This poem is for lovechild, who asked for a Vampyre poem. I wanted it to be a little different than the typical Vampyre tale.
Tagged with: agony • carnival • curse • denial • dreams • eternity • freak of nature • guilt • hands of time • lovechild • original sin • poem • silence • time content • torture • truth
Filed under: Vampyre
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omg i just happened to look here right after i emailed you and i can’t even express how astounded i am… i knew you would do the muse justice but you managed to give life to an essence that i can’t fathom; you brought my Vampyre to "life" as it were, and all i can say (besides thank you so so much) is that i hope he becomes a recurring character now and again in your poetry.
i really do appreciate you thinking of me, it has a phenomenal impact on my psyche.
I Loved your poem to lovechild and i;m sure she will also.You are really so blessed to write such great works of all kind of poems.You were born with talent and i;m glad you always share it Keep writing always as your poetry really rocks ….Always Shelly
my god I think it’s phenomenal!
Nice Work indeed.
i think its okay but very rocky
It’s wonderful.