My Vampire Fan Fiction?
I was trying to think of a story to write and came up with a few ideas. What do you think of it?
Title:Vampires:—-(Can you help with the title, please?)
Characters:Valentina Jefferson, Damon Brooks, Asha Michaels, Jake Moore, Drake Card
Summary:Valentina, a 3000 year old vampire finally found a place where vampires could ”live in peace” and not have to be hunted by humans. She even falls in love with a handsome 3020 year old vampire, Damon Brooks. But when Damon’s best friend, Drake, becomes jealous, he puts Damon’s vampiric abilities and trust to the test and even puts Valentina’s life at risk. Damon must do everything in his power to the one he loves, or has to live the rest of eternity alone.
PS. I know the ending is a bit cheesy but I couldn’t think of anything. So….Feedback? And a title please?
Tagged with: asha • best friend • brooks • drake • eternity • jake moore • love • michaels • peace • risk • vampire • vampires • vampiric
Filed under: Vampire Fiction
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This sounds kind of boring for a description. Great names though. I’d say since "vampires" is a boring title, try something exotic for a title. Have you ever heard of someone buying a book about vampires and stuff like that with a extremely boring title. Try something like "Dark Love", "Hunting Love" or something like that. Something deep/meaningful, dark/ mysterious for a title.
First, write the book BEFORE having a title since you may want to change the title later on or it may be easier to create a title. Also, if you are wanting to publish this, make sure that you do NOT have the same title as someone else due to copyrights and similar stuff.
Personally, I’d never want to read that book since I’m more into the mystery/action/adventure/betrayal novels. But since I’m not into the romance, it’s okay.
You will find lots and lots of people that would want to read that.
Focus on the title, plot development and scenes and do not copy other authors and you will be okay.
Good luck with your writing!!
If it’s a fanfiction, it won’t be published. How is it a fan-fiction anyway? I’ve never heard of this plot but very interesting. I’d read it.
Is it fanfiction or isn’t it? Just writing about vampires doesn’t make it fanfic.
You need to think about this plot a bit more. Why would someone who’s 3000 years old have a friend who doesn’t appear to be a vampire at all? It would be like an adult being friends with a 5 year old. Why can’t Valentina do something except sit around and wait to be rescued? Exactly 3000 years old? 3020 just sounds silly - almost as if it’s because the man has to be older.